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The Ninety-Nine Times Before by ~welzi:iconwelzi:





Wanting to hold
What I wanted to kill
To feel it seep in
Envelop my insides
I’d give you my conscious breath
To feel you in my hand
To crush you in my palm
For stealing my thought-path
A needle in the back
A safety pin holding together my heart
It’s never hurt this much before
Not the last time
Or the other ninety-nine times before
©2004-2009 ~welzi
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Author's Comments

It's harder giving up this writing business than I had first thought, this is five minute write, nothing special.

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:iconsugarfreewings:
Jesus I'm so glad you posted this. It's wonderful, I honestly don't know how you do it. I think my favourite part has to be the first two lines, they flow with each other so well. :heart:

ps I'm reading Letter to a Stranger but I have limited internet time at the moment, so it's really, really slow reading I'm afraid. But what I've read so far is astounding.
:iconwelzi:
thanks alot

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~fin.
:iconjewelsy:
wooow, big words *impressed* i have no idea why you'd want to quit writing, you're so damn good at it! :D

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:iconemotionlessriotgirl:
well done

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:iconjasmine:
I like this, very deep and insightful (even if it was only a 5min piece)! Don't quit writing, once you do it's REALLY hard to go back to the level you were at before!

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Follow love and it will flee
Flee love and it will follow thee.
:iconkaryaazure:
I like it a lot . consieder revising the second line
Wanting to hold
What I wanted to kill

doesnt flow as well as the rest.
:iconwelzi:
thanks alot.

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Mahatma Caine Jeeves. :lol:

~fin.
:iconcklaighe:
a very well written poem..

nice work.

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:iconstacey-jayne-2005:
ohh i like it :D and :wave: hiya

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